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safa's avatar

this was beautiful! i didn’t realise i was holding my breath until the last line washed over me

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saouda cécile's avatar

Oh wow thank you for sharing your thoughts on the poem ! I liked every part of it!🫂

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Walyullah's avatar

Holy frig this poem is ridiculously good!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!

The part that got me the most was the ocean in his mum's belly bit. Like wow. Such imaginitive language.

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